Well done on doing all the posts BUT your job now is to go back and add resources, webtools powerpoints etc. This blog needs to be visual as well. It currently reads like a series of essays on line. This is very important
"Sound is very useful for example when it comes to messing up on footage, a sound track can be easily edited into the footage and cover the mess that was made therefore the footage looks clean and fits perfectly."
Read through everything you write several times - this doesn't make sense.
"There is two types of sound" - you mean 'are'
"Foley is an edited sound that is recorded over top of the visual"
There are more examples of this in the above post - how about you get Heather to have a quick read through on Monday so you have help whilst you are on each post?
Well done on doing all the posts BUT your job now is to go back and add resources, webtools powerpoints etc.
ReplyDeleteThis blog needs to be visual as well. It currently reads like a series of essays on line. This is very important
"Sound is very useful for example when it comes to messing up on footage, a sound track can be easily edited into the footage and cover the mess that was made therefore the footage looks clean and fits perfectly."
ReplyDeleteRead through everything you write several times - this doesn't make sense.
"There is two types of sound" - you mean 'are'
"Foley is an edited sound that is recorded over top of the visual"
There are more examples of this in the above post - how about you get Heather to have a quick read through on Monday so you have help whilst you are on each post?
Please do as asked in my feedback
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